Do you think I should add more content? I will be adding more personal stories, they just need to be corrected and shortened. I'm trying to keep the stories to a page each person? Do you think the Terms and Definition pages are too overwhelming?
Yeah, maybe could you add more content? Like information, I like your steps - but maybe you could spread them out into more spreads instead of only taking up one spread?
Also, have you tried to have the stories maybe a spread per person, instead of just one page, have two? I don't think the terms and definitions are overwhelming, it's a good idea.
I think it would be good to have at least 8 stories. Are there going to be pictures of objects? It would add to the spread's design if you choose to create a spread per person. I like the simple design and color scheme. I also like the terms and definition page.
In terms of content, what about having a section that focuses on the other side of the story? I.e. the friends or family that these people came out too. Just to add some variety? I’m not sure if this is at all a good idea, but it would add more content to the book, and add another interesting perspective.
Yeah, maybe could you add more content? Like information, I like your steps - but maybe you could spread them out into more spreads instead of only taking up one spread?
ReplyDeleteAlso, have you tried to have the stories maybe a spread per person, instead of just one page, have two? I don't think the terms and definitions are overwhelming, it's a good idea.
I think it would be good to have at least 8 stories. Are there going to be pictures of objects? It would add to the spread's design if you choose to create a spread per person. I like the simple design and color scheme. I also like the terms and definition page.
ReplyDeleteIn terms of content, what about having a section that focuses on the other side of the story? I.e. the friends or family that these people came out too. Just to add some variety? I’m not sure if this is at all a good idea, but it would add more content to the book, and add another interesting perspective.
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